Pouring Down Snow


It's snowing outside today
and sticking in spots
it's as cold as an icicle in the airway
our heat is kicking on lots

I've been thinking concerning messages
that gets sent by our work
I believe a misunderstanding regarding images
that aren't what I meant to perk
if that is the case I apologize
I'm not an evil person for sure
and appreciate the comments you actualize
I'll aim to be clearer adjure
the way I present is meant not to conflict
with anyone who does read
I hope my voice is clear and without to afflict
for I'm trying to be a careful creed

It's snowing outside tonight
it'll be gone by tomorrow it seems
I wish you all a swell night
in whatever time zone sweet dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 7:05 PM
I barely got a sprinkle of snow right before Halloween. I am ready for snow but not the bitter winter frosty mix.
Crabtree Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 9:08 AM
It was gone the next day :)
Downing  Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 8:33 PM
Oh I’m looking forward to some snow days in... Lol! Angela, I hope you’re enjoying your snowed in with some hot cocoa. And I bid you goodnight too :) xoxo
Crabtree Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 3:37 PM
Thank you, Akkina. It was beautiful, but it was all gone the next day :)
Callus Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 5:19 AM
Thank you for the sweet wishes, Angela :) Unfortunately no snow here in Malta :( Stay nice and cozy inside where it's warm! ~ Regards // paul
Crabtree Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Paul. I stayed in all day :)
Pandit Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 4:55 AM
Good time to stay indoors and reflect on things--as your poem does, Angela.
Crabtree Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Vijay. I did stay inside :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 1:53 AM
No snow in Malta. Never skied. But you paint a lovely scene. As the song goes, let it snow. We'll stay cosy inside. ~~
Crabtree Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 6:50 PM
Thank you, Victor. It was nice and warm inside :)
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