Notes About The Poem

Written 8/28/2023

Pour Your Heart Out

Whilst tomorrow's maze summer heart may grieve
Ripened feel of the mine and old heart's weave.

The seam leaves and fine bright colored petal
utter silence of my home, unsettle.

As on a canvas of colors, same when
A process or art of using the pen.

Yesterday back, while sermons echo in strife,
an abandoned bethel, resolving My life.

Do I have time to fill the pages chapters,
with enthralled memories morning after's?

As clouds feather out like angel wings,
and the moon traces behind ancient things.

Through a foggy window that returns me;
While a curtain of dreams is drawn it left be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 10:46 PM
Brilliant piece, Eve, congratulations:)
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 10:52 PM
As clouds feather out like angel wings! Whoa! Congratulations well deserved win this is! Beautiful imagery
Caliri Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 4:57 PM
"Maze summer heat may grieve..." is a killer line, amazing writing. Congrats on 4th place out of 75! This was truly an exceptional piece.
Roper Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so very much for my placement, I am very honored.
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:57 AM
This is so precious, Eve. Emotive and with lovely imagery. Also I wanted to thank you for my contest win. Hope more and more people will be buying the nursery rhyme book you put together
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