Milton Toran Poet Rhyme

Potpourri

Each day as I awaken,
Potpourri's on my mind;
Those moments we shared as one,
Together, our hearts entwined

The years bred forth an eerie change,
Our spirits grew further apart;
Those sweet memories of potpourri,
Won't mend a broken heart

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Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2012 at 12:56 PM Milton, congratulations with your poem featured on this awesome endings week of 2012. Wishing you the best of 2013 to come... luv * Linda

Vince Suzadail Jr. September 15, 2009 at 9:22 AM This one's nice. A melancholy feeling to it. Vince

Doris Culverhouse September 13, 2009 at 6:22 PM sweetly sad, nicely written

Carol Sunshine Brown September 6, 2009 at 4:38 PM What a beautiful day and what splendid poetry I am reading. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors Milton. A real tear jerker. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno September 5, 2009 at 12:18 PM Beautiful work Milton, love the simplicity...Raul

Michael Jordan September 5, 2009 at 11:21 AM Milton his poem is painfully beautiful - they say that time heals all wounds but some i reckon not - God Bless, mj

Sara Kendrick September 5, 2009 at 11:13 AM Interesting Rhyme using allegory. Keep writing. Sara

September 5, 2009 at 9:21 AM Interesting way to address the subject of lost love. I like the idea of potpourri to forward your thoughts. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen