Potholes 1

Potholes

The joy of riding
where the small ones
have gone away
turns into nothing
at the big one
minutes  away.

* This is about the joy of riding on the  highway which has been recently repaired and re-laid, ridding it of its pits and potholes and the mortification of subsequently getting stopped by the traffic police  or by the less-than-civil  contract labor manning toll gates.

05 mar 13
Form: Grook ( A short aphoristic poem characterised by irony, paradox, brevity, sophisticated rhyme and often satiric in nature)

Contest: A Grook for all occasions

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/19/2013 11:22:00 PM
jag, I am sure I told you what it was. Let me go look again, ok!!
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Date: 4/18/2013 12:34:00 PM
nice write..jag sir......
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Date: 4/9/2013 9:22:00 PM
lol...love the grook.... got many of them down the next street... good luck in the contest...PD
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Date: 3/15/2013 12:13:00 AM
Now THAT's a Grook!!! hi, there, Jag!!
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Date: 3/13/2013 6:10:00 AM
Enjoy your riding, Jag ! :) :) - Luck in contest! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2013 7:33:00 PM
We share similar deteriorations Jag, some would knock the bejeepers out of a car so you sure have to be on the look out. Who would ever think of potholes; too funny Luv, Lizzy
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Date: 3/8/2013 5:35:00 AM
hahahah.....this one gave me the giggles! U even make potholes poetic! I owe u a note soon...I will be back to read more. gwendolen
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Date: 3/7/2013 10:41:00 AM
I like the flow of this one..Those roads sometimes when being repaired or extended can be a real pain to travel and it is so nice when they are finished..Very descriptive of the situation..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..The ABC one was hard to write..Sara
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Date: 3/5/2013 8:08:00 AM
:) very unique write dear poet Jag...sp nice to read your ink..thanks for sharing the pleasure :) Sk
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