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Little one
It is so quiet right now but it won't always be
I am so close right now
See the stars?
There are so many that 
You will never be able see them all
Let that always overwhelm you
I don't know what they will mean to you
I will hold you as close as I can
While I can
See the stars are so far away that some
Are no longer 
I don't know what they will mean to you
You overwhelm me because I won't ever
Be able to see all of you
But you also overwhelmed me because 
I saw the world was here before you
Seems impossible now
I am going to hold you close
In case you are a fleeting dream
I know some day you will want me to let go 
Today I am thankful 
That it is so far away that I can't see it yet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/30/2016 12:38:00 PM
This is a very nice poem you have written. I really like the peacefulness and originality throughout. Thanks,Jeff
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Date: 12/18/2016 4:08:00 AM
Thank you for such kind comments. I haven't written in so long and am doing it secretly on this website. I am not even sure how the website works but hearing these comments has inspired me. Thank you for the encouragement.
Date: 10/30/2016 11:11:00 AM
your born so much to see to do, and teach him/her never to old to cuddle your mum will be fine :-) stephen
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Date: 12/18/2016 4:10:00 AM
Thanks for such kind comments. I haven't written in so long and am doing it secretly on this website. I am not even sure how the website works but hearing these comments has inspired me. Thank you for the encouragement.
Date: 10/30/2016 7:13:00 AM
Nice moments held in a nice poem ...
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Date: 12/18/2016 4:10:00 AM
Thanks for such kind comments. I haven't written in so long and am doing it secretly on this website. I am not even sure how the website works but hearing these comments has inspired me. Thank you for the encouragement.
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