Potential

out
   of the
     ordinary
the
fantastic
    appears,
a vivid
    emblem
an image
    superimposed,
an amalgam
blossoming
    slowly
in
a
slant
   of
     light,
dappled
yet
   layered
in the
    dim light..
peppered
with rythm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Devonshire Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 10:58 PM
Creative thoughts and a very interesting design that flows with the words, Brian. You have well captured that feeling we have when we encounter something extraordinary.
Strand Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:10 AM
Thnks for your encouraging comments Carolyn
Sands Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 7:33 AM
This is excellent Brian :)
Strand Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Thanks Heidi for your comments
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