Potential

out
   of the
     ordinary
the
fantastic
    appears,
a vivid
    emblem
an image
    superimposed,
an amalgam
blossoming
    slowly
in
a
slant
   of
     light,
dappled
yet
   layered
in the
    dim light..
peppered
with rythm

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/26/2018 10:58:00 PM

Creative thoughts and a very interesting design that flows with the words, Brian. You have well captured that feeling we have when we encounter something extraordinary.

Brian Strand
Date: 11/27/2018 3:10:00 AM

Thnks for your encouraging comments Carolyn

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/26/2018 7:33:00 AM

This is excellent Brian :)

Brian Strand
Date: 11/26/2018 9:16:00 AM

Thanks Heidi for your comments