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Potent Pout

"Potent Pout" lips are warm and toasty waking to your eyes canvasing my face as afterglow of Sun at twilight time dancing to love's music as your arms enfold my waist lips pouting to taste melting steps of stars into perfect rhyme. lips are sweet and sultry singing to soft melodies words of tenderness emitting pure emotion as waves cascading ocean lips lament devotion building dreams and desires uplifting to inspire in expressions of deepest love. lips are moist and mellow sleeping to the sound of breathing love notes caressing my cheek safe within the confines of your heart content as fire smolders in passions peak as embers burning forever seedling for two turtledoves so unique. lips are potent and pouty *For Carol Brown's LIPS ... *Written by: Linda-Marie The "Sweethearet" of P.S. *July 14, 2012.

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:06:00 AM

I miss you, and the uniqueness of your pen, and smile... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2012 11:09:00 AM

Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Rockman Pritts

Date: 7/26/2012 3:04:00 PM

"Sleeping to the sound of breathing". That is an excellent line. It could also be a title. Well done and congrats on the win. I enjoyed reading it very much. Rockman

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2012 5:03:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

David Williams

Date: 7/25/2012 3:53:00 AM

Linda-Marie super congrats on your win, excellent write..you are on a roll....David

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/24/2012 7:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem winning.

Joy Wellington

Date: 7/24/2012 7:26:00 PM

Congrats LM, as always you have something sultry for us...always enjoy your writes. One love. Joy Wells

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/24/2012 5:40:00 PM

WON 3rd place.. thankxxx..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/24/2012 5:06:00 PM

Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

Joseph May

Date: 7/24/2012 4:26:00 PM

congrats on your win Linda

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/17/2012 5:15:00 PM

‡ Tis The Most Beautiful In Intimate Treasures Which Love Shares, Dear Fascinating & Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Linda * You Are Passionate As Gifted & Yesss, 'The Kiss,' Is The Tell Tale Sign, Signifying, The Depths Of Beautiful Love ... A Favourite In Beauty, Brushed Brilliantly By, The Essence Of Beauty Herself * My Luv, Rachel ‡

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2012 8:51:00 PM

Some awesome alliteration in some of the lines of this cute poem, Linda.Luv your four standout solo lines on lips!! sure to be a winner!!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/16/2012 12:50:00 PM

beautiful and romantic write, Linda-Marie

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/15/2012 10:55:00 AM

Linda, they sure are potent hey ;) So good to read you again.. Hope you are enjoying your weekend.. Wishing you the best for Carol's contest as well.. love Wilma

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/15/2012 10:53:00 AM

Wow, what an illustrious and beautiful write my friend! I really love this lip inspiring poem, to be locked within someone elses lips is truly a special treat...at least my wife thinks so!! Simply a gorgeous write Linda-Marie! Great Work!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/14/2012 2:50:00 PM

Well my Jersey Girl, from my lips to yours muahhhhhh lol A wonderful take on the contest with passion and warmth throughout. And yes JG I shall be checking out your new contest. Thanks for open arms for me Xoxo Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/14/2012 2:05:00 PM

your exquisite use of words and how they fill their place in this piece is just adorable, sweet.. the pout reminds me of marilyn monroe.. on to the winners' list!.. happy weekend and stay well!..:) hugggs!