Linda-Marie Sweetheart Poet Rhyme

Potent Pout

  "Potent Pout"

lips are warm and toasty

waking to your eyes
canvasing my face
as afterglow of Sun
at twilight time
dancing to love's music
as your arms enfold my waist
lips pouting to taste
melting steps of stars
into perfect rhyme.

lips are sweet and sultry

singing to soft melodies
words of tenderness
emitting pure emotion
as waves cascading ocean
lips lament devotion
building dreams and desires
uplifting to inspire
in expressions of deepest love.

lips are moist and mellow

sleeping to the sound of breathing
love notes caressing my cheek
safe within the confines of your heart
content as fire smolders in passions peak
as embers burning forever
seedling for two turtledoves so unique.

lips are potent and pouty


*For Carol Brown's LIPS ...
*Written by:  Linda-Marie The "Sweethearet" of P.S.
*July 14, 2012.

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Skat A March 13, 2014 at 2:06 AM I miss you, and the uniqueness of your pen, and smile... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2012 at 11:09 AM Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Rockman Pritts July 26, 2012 at 3:04 PM "Sleeping to the sound of breathing". That is an excellent line. It could also be a title. Well done and congrats on the win. I enjoyed reading it very much. Rockman

Sara Kendrick July 25, 2012 at 5:03 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

David Williams July 25, 2012 at 3:53 AM Linda-Marie super congrats on your win, excellent write..you are on a roll....David

Joann Grisetti July 24, 2012 at 7:36 PM Congratulations on your poem winning.

Joy Wellington July 24, 2012 at 7:26 PM Congrats LM, as always you have something sultry for us...always enjoy your writes. One love. Joy Wells

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 24, 2012 at 5:40 PM WON 3rd place.. thankxxx..

Debbie Guzzi July 24, 2012 at 5:06 PM Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

Joseph May July 24, 2012 at 4:26 PM congrats on your win Linda

Rachel St.Cross July 17, 2012 at 5:15 PM ‡ Tis The Most Beautiful In Intimate Treasures Which Love Shares, Dear Fascinating & Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Linda * You Are Passionate As Gifted & Yesss, 'The Kiss,' Is The Tell Tale Sign, Signifying, The Depths Of Beautiful Love ... A Favourite In Beauty, Brushed Brilliantly By, The Essence Of Beauty Herself * My Luv, Rachel ‡

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2012 at 8:51 PM Some awesome alliteration in some of the lines of this cute poem, Linda.Luv your four standout solo lines on lips!! sure to be a winner!!

Jack Horne July 16, 2012 at 12:50 PM beautiful and romantic write, Linda-Marie

Wilma Neels July 15, 2012 at 10:55 AM Linda, they sure are potent hey ;) So good to read you again.. Hope you are enjoying your weekend.. Wishing you the best for Carol's contest as well.. love Wilma

Russell Sivey July 15, 2012 at 10:53 AM Wow, what an illustrious and beautiful write my friend! I really love this lip inspiring poem, to be locked within someone elses lips is truly a special treat...at least my wife thinks so!! Simply a gorgeous write Linda-Marie! Great Work!!

Michael J. Falotico July 14, 2012 at 2:50 PM Well my Jersey Girl, from my lips to yours muahhhhhh lol A wonderful take on the contest with passion and warmth throughout. And yes JG I shall be checking out your new contest. Thanks for open arms for me Xoxo Michael

Nette Onclaud July 14, 2012 at 2:05 PM your exquisite use of words and how they fill their place in this piece is just adorable, sweet.. the pout reminds me of marilyn monroe.. on to the winners' list!.. happy weekend and stay well!..:) hugggs!

Kash Poet July 14, 2012 at 11:34 AM Excellent write on lips Linda....Enjoyed very much.Best wishes to you.

David Williams July 14, 2012 at 9:50 AM Linda-Marie, elegant my dear poet, good luck ...David

Richard Palmer July 14, 2012 at 9:44 AM love.your.lips,warm,toasty,sweet,sultry,moist,mellow,potent,pouty,great write my SWEETHEART

Carol Sunshine Brown July 14, 2012 at 8:34 AM Thank you for your support Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff July 14, 2012 at 8:33 AM Whooshhh! This "ode" to love is really good, Linda! Jmg

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 14, 2012 at 8:10 AM lips are a great start to loving so,eone special.. so enjoy poets as this is my take on lips .. kisses to all from us.. with luv..