Notes About The Poem

Dedicated to Poetry Soup.

Pot of Poems

Dip the ladle into the soup,
Serve it up to the hungry group,
Eyes taking in every detail,
Looking down the trail,
Working out the story,
Shining in all its glory,
But sometimes hard to find,
Sometimes scrambling up the mind,
Beautiful flowing lines,
Rhymes show and shines,
Gliding across your mouth,
looking North, East, West and South,
As words fly away,
The warm feelings stay,
And your mind wanders,
Eventually it squanders,
And is lost from your memory,
But there is a remedy,
Just go to Poetry Soup,
And take a BIGGG scoop,
Of poems by amazing poets there,
All with their own personal flair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bartley Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:51 AM
I liked how you dedicated your poem to poetrysoup and not just my contest. I loved the BIGGG scoop (Multiply meanings) and the positive vibe you give. Sorry it took so long to congratulate you in placing, I'm just getting around to see who placed. All the poems were so good. This was my first contest as host. They were all winners in my book but as judge, I had to choose, and your poem definitely stood as greatness. Thanks for entering my contest. And thanks for sharing.
Bird Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 5:12 PM
Hi Benjamin, thanks for the placing in the contest! I'm glad you liked my poem :D. Thanks so much for commenting to, means a lot to me. I - Phoenix :D
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
Bird Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 10:41 PM
Thanks Sara! - Phoenix :D
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 3:58 PM
Hello Fire Bird, wow! I love it. It will be my faqv. Love the pot of poems. enjoy your ev ening my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 6:03 AM
Hello Fire Bird, Hyes i made it my fav. You are welcome. Enjoy y9our day m y frikend./Darlene/
Bird Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 6:56 PM
Wow! Thank you, Darlene, you to! - Phoenix :)
John Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 2:28 AM
A pot of great lines, here, Fire Bird. Thank you.
Bird Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 2:22 PM
Thank you, Andrew, there are a lot of amazing poets on poetry soup! - Phoenix :)
Kulkarni Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Beautiful flowing lines penned here for the soupers. Enjoyed reading your poetry!
Bird Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 11:44 AM
Thanks! I will take a look at your poetry!! - Phoenix :)
Rolland Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 10:56 PM
enjoyed, and the amazing poets too, nicely done, thanks poet
Bird Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 10:57 PM
Hi Yann, thanks for reading my poem! - Phoenix :)
Meadows Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 1:39 PM
A good poem. Well written.
Bird Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 9:22 PM
Thanks! Tribute to all the amazing poets. - Phoenix :)
Sangster - K Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 12:17 PM
A enjoyable read for me today and a wonderful tribute to all the poets here at PoetrySoup. Cheers Anne :-)
Bird Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 9:23 PM
Thank you, you are all amazing poets!! - Phoenix :)
One Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Your poem rhymes and flows so well .. nice tribute to the soup.
Bird Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Thank you for commenting! - Phoenix :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 2:24 AM
Excellent poem in all departments. Well done. Blessings.
Bird Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Thank you, Victor! - Phoenix :)
M  Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 12:51 PM
Excellent P.Soup poem Phoenix!! Well written….Debx
Bird Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 8:21 PM
No, not yet, Haha, soon though!! - Phoenix :)
M  Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Sounds like you are really enjoying it Phoenix….good on you! Got that brother of yours signed up yet?? Haha!!! Debx
Bird Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Thanks Deb! The logo gave me inspiration! And all the amazing poets and poems. - Phoenix :)
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