Possibilities

Sun falls upon the river bends of natures opportunities.

cory long
natures monoku contest
rick parise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 12:12 PM
May we all travel those bends with friends.
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 10:10 PM
I like the symbolic place you took this one, Cory.Good monoku.
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 6:44 PM
Nicely interpreted picture of the contest, quite a unique read, cory
Foulk Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:31 PM
a great piece of fine work Cory, good luck in the contest.
Song Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Nice blend of river and bends...works well. (nature's---?) Enjoyed...You got the image of the picture down pat! Gwendolen
Onclaud Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:22 AM
splendid approach for a dazzling monoku, cory! winner's luck to you! :) hugggs, nette
Rhinem Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:05 AM
Smile ~ Very nice pleasant meandering stream ~ Cory my man ~ Possibilities ~ Living Water amid ones, hands ~ Lovely ~ Love, John!:) ~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 8:12 AM
such a super Monoku cory.. so visual and vibrant with grand imagery luv.. good luck in Rick's contest.. enjoyed especially the sun ..oh..
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