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Possibilities

Sun falls upon the river bends of natures opportunities. cory long natures monoku contest rick parise

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Robert Johnson

Date: 6/6/2011 12:12:00 PM

May we all travel those bends with friends.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2011 10:10:00 PM

I like the symbolic place you took this one, Cory.Good monoku.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/1/2011 6:44:00 PM

Nicely interpreted picture of the contest, quite a unique read, cory

James Foulk

Date: 6/1/2011 12:31:00 PM

a great piece of fine work Cory, good luck in the contest.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/1/2011 9:39:00 AM

Nice blend of river and bends...works well. (nature's---?) Enjoyed...You got the image of the picture down pat! Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2011 9:22:00 AM

splendid approach for a dazzling monoku, cory! winner's luck to you! :) hugggs, nette

John Rhinem

Date: 6/1/2011 9:05:00 AM

Smile ~ Very nice pleasant meandering stream ~ Cory my man ~ Possibilities ~ Living Water amid ones, hands ~ Lovely ~ Love, John!:) ~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/1/2011 8:12:00 AM

such a super Monoku cory.. so visual and vibrant with grand imagery luv.. good luck in Rick's contest.. enjoyed especially the sun ..oh..