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It will be amazing up there Different, dissimilar place Not like here, a daily rat race In heaven, I will be an heir An heir to God's amazing grace Never feeling I've been displaced I will have no burdens to bear No raw responsibilities Removed are my disabilities Singing Hallelujah without care Be able to stand in heaven's choir I'll have the air to sing higher Praise Christ in songs without compare Not fainting, not short of breath When leaving this life, will gain health It will be amazing up there In heaven I will be an heir I will have not burdens to bear Singing Hallelujah without care Praise Christ in songs without compare
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Buhagiar Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Amazing grace is the heaven waiting for us. Great spiritual poem.
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 10:24 AM
Thank you, Victor. I knew this poem was in the making, just did not know when it would materialize. Sara k
Buhagiar Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 7:20 AM
One needs patience when a poem is unfinished.
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 7:48 AM
Thank you, Victor for the information. I will take that to heart. I have prayed for it for years and it is coming little by little. Sara K
Elliott Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 9:59 AM
Stirring and resonant poem under construction, Sara. Very moving. Awaiting the finished gem. Many blessings to you. ~
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, Regina. SK
Empress Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 8:21 AM
One of my fave quotes too, sometimes our silence speaks volumes and some may misinterpret it as being naive but truth is deeper than they can fathom. Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Life is good, it has warmed up a bit and it is sprinkling adding some moisture to the dry air. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Poet Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 6:37 AM
Sara, Good luck with your new poem, will come back when it's ready
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 7:26 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. My muse has left for right now. Sara K
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