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It will be amazing up there
Different, dissimilar place
Not like here, a daily rat race

In heaven, I will be an heir
An heir to God's amazing grace
Never feeling I've been displaced  

I will have no burdens to bear
No raw responsibilities
Removed are my disabilities

Singing Hallelujah without care
Be able to stand in heaven's choir
I'll have the air to sing higher

Praise Christ in songs without compare
Not fainting, not short of breath
When leaving this life, will gain health

It will be amazing up there
In heaven I will be an heir
I will have not burdens to bear
Singing Hallelujah without care
Praise Christ in songs without compare   


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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/24/2024 9:39:00 AM

Amazing grace is the heaven waiting for us. Great spiritual poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/24/2024 10:24:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. I knew this poem was in the making, just did not know when it would materialize. Sara k

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/24/2024 7:20:00 AM

One needs patience when a poem is unfinished.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/24/2024 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, Victor for the information. I will take that to heart. I have prayed for it for years and it is coming little by little. Sara K

Regina Elliott

Date: 1/23/2024 9:59:00 AM

Stirring and resonant poem under construction, Sara. Very moving. Awaiting the finished gem. Many blessings to you. ~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2024 1:15:00 PM

Thank you, Regina. SK

Ink Empress

Date: 1/23/2024 8:21:00 AM

One of my fave quotes too, sometimes our silence speaks volumes and some may misinterpret it as being naive but truth is deeper than they can fathom. Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2024 9:39:00 AM

Life is good, it has warmed up a bit and it is sprinkling adding some moisture to the dry air. Thanks for the visit. Sara K