Rachel Robinson Poet Narrative

Positive Mind

A winter slumber has come
The summer bliss is gone
Everything is dying
But the joy is still in sight
Keep a positive mind
Hold onto what you have
Remember not all things are good 
But things could be worse
A POSITIVE MIND
Easy for things to get lost
Chaos is an unmistakable worry
chasing nothings
A POSITIVE MIND
Hard to maintain
A strength only few hold
An assperation for others
A dream they wish to fulfill
A POSITIVE MIND

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Carol Sunshine Brown December 8, 2009 at 6:49 AM The Christmas season seems to bring out such brilliant poetry from all the poets here at PoetrySoup making you all ~~~Poet Extraordinaires~~~. I thank you for sharing your poetry with us all through the year Rachel. Love, Carol

L'Nass Shango December 7, 2009 at 11:44 AM I try to keep that state of mind, and your poem helps a lot, thanks

Simone Segal December 7, 2009 at 3:04 AM A great subject, a great poem! most of my poetry is about positive thinking, take a look at my poem, Brim Your Minds Cup, love Simone