Positive Intent For the New Year.

Splitting the seam of reality,
vibrating onto the scene a new velocity,
throwing out the karmic boomerang, it come back to me,
speeding through space, impacting on clarity,
dropping wise words like bombs, i’m a spiritual charity,
too long rejecting knowledge, intellectual anorexia,
the truth is there vexin ya, perplexing ya, 
start learning truth government running checks on ya, 
what they learnt early is keep your friends close and your enemies closer,
the invisible prison etches itself around,
but they got carried away,
HMS new world order has run aground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 7, 2010 at 8:34 AM
wow... and while I haven't read you in a while, it also is quite my pleasure again! This is outstanding. .
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March 4, 2010 at 1:55 PM
Enjoyed reading you indeed..Charma:)
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March 1, 2010 at 11:02 PM
Hmm, interesting write. A bit of a combination of world events and particularly this nation's events and ourselves. I don't know about world order, but I do know that the world should be like a family under God. Thanks for sharing and please do check my new one, "arrows", especially part 1, if you have the time. You will see why. :) Best wishes, Caroline.
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February 28, 2010 at 6:14 PM
Very high quality poem. Enjoyed reading..
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February 28, 2010 at 3:19 PM
Like Susan, I am impressed with your vocabulary and knowledge ..to put this together in poetry form.. all things plaguing the human race today... thankxxx for sharing Lance...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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February 28, 2010 at 1:25 PM
I am impressed with your terminology!
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February 28, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Lance~ Thank you for commenting on my poetry you have an interesting perspective on things in this piece "Positive intent for the new year"! Keep writing I enjoy your depth and creativity ! Kindly Laura :)
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