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Positifically Negative

Today I've decided Not to be misguided By negative feelings I'm sick to the teeth Of feelings of grief Overpowering and revealing My negative approach Requires a coach So my thoughts Are more decisive Negativity you see It is of no use to me I think it is derisive So I will try today To throw negativity away And be a more positive person If negativity creeps in I'll throw it in the bin Telling it I have an aversion I may have left it too late. To illuminate My mind into positive thinking I do not feel that strong It hasn't been long Before my positive thoughts Start shrinking Alas and Alack Please hurry back My thinking is getting hazy I've had enough Of this philosophical stuff My negativity has driven me crazy

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Date: 5/6/2023 8:31:00 PM
I adore this journey of realism about positivity and negativity. So true and resonant: At a certain point, it's very hard to recoup positivity... But it can be done! Go for it, Shirley!
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 5/7/2023 12:02:00 AM
I'll keep trying.
Date: 5/5/2023 11:39:00 PM
we are like electricity, sometimes positive, sometimes negative, we oscillate, and can't stand in a stubborned position, thanks for the "clever" and relevant penning, i ask myself too
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Date: 5/5/2023 10:33:00 PM
A positive poem with a funny hint.
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 5/7/2023 12:02:00 AM
Thank you , Victor

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