Portray

Charcoal gray clouds cover the sun
Could be raindrops today 
Snuzzle in a warm sweater
Energy a change in weather's ray

A dampness laps at my notebook
Surrounds my rocking chair
Swirls of cool envelope the porch
Draping fall's presence there

Will it rain or soon pass on by
We need the rain I say
However the weather reveals itself
Delight in season portray 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Cavanaugh Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 4:43 PM
Well done. You didn't mention a season but I imagined fall. Fall is my favorite season.
Farley Iv Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 11:07 AM
Amazing imagery Sara. Well penned. -Patrick Farley IV
Matose Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 9:36 AM
I LIKE HOW YOU HAVE APPROACHED THE SUBJECT OF NATURE SUCH AS RAIN, HOW WE EXPECTANTLY WAIT FOR IT TO SOOTH PARCHED HEARTS, SOIL ETC. IN A NUTSHELL, YOU'VE SHOWN THAT WATER IS LIFE! JM
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October 15, 2013 at 7:54 PM
hello, Sara I like your poem very much. wonderful blessing words and imagery. .luv...linda
Onclaud Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 1:32 PM
enjoyed the mellow mood of your work, sara.. you are mother nature;s best friend!... lovely piece as always..:) huggs
Sivey Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 9:18 PM
This write filled me with complete relaxation as the day was about ready to be portrayed! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this evening, such a tremendous write! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
Guzzi Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 6:51 PM
Learning to love nature in all its aspects is a real gift! Light & Love
Posey Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 12:59 PM
I sensed a very relaxing mood after this read. Your poem today was somehow mesmerizing. Great write.... genuinely enjoyed.... Thanks for your visits.... Jake
Hamilton Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 8:54 AM
stunning Sara you have captured this day so well love the imagery here Ty for visiting me Shadow x smile
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