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Portrait of a Broken Dream

You painted the picture of who I should of been

The canvas began so white, so clean

Your vison was something you alone could see

A portrait of fidelity

How now do I return from such disgrace

God knows i'm in a lonely place

I know the route of lies without a map

Trusting in you, the faith I lacked

Yet I love you

I need you

Take the brush and cover over the imperfections

Belive this love can be ressurected

You cover both your beautiful eyes

Turn away from the me I so despise

Thats why I love you

Why I need you

Take the paint and begin a new

This time I vow, I will believe it too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/15/2009 9:49:00 AM
....I loved every word and verse of it~for I could feel it coming from "Your Soul!!!"~A soul that I have truly come to love "Very Deeply!!!"~So, until we meet again, soon, sooner, "My Love Forever & Always To You & Your Precious Son, Eternally, John!!!"~"Kisses To 'You' Forever~Smile~Bye Beautiful Julie Cottingham!!!:)
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Date: 2/15/2009 9:44:00 AM
....I have been somewhat tied up with work also though! And sometimes, I need to withdraw a little bit, from certain moments!? But, I "Never" want to withdraw from "You!!!"~ And, I hope that "You" shall never want to withdraw from me!!!?~"This is such a sincere and soul searching and beautiful write Julie!!!!!"....cont....
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Date: 2/15/2009 9:39:00 AM
"Hello Beautiful & Even More Beautiful Julie Cottingham!!!"~I sincerely hope that "You & Your Precious Son" are doing wonderfully this morning dear lady!!? Sorry I haven't gotten back to "You" before now~still sorting through some things~seperating the wheat from the chaff I would say~Smile~but believe me~"You" are definately not the chaff!!!....cont....
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Date: 1/13/2009 7:54:00 PM
Julie very emotional, good write. Laurie
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