Poppies

Where Valleys are lush with pastures new 
Fresh and crisp, from morning dew; 
There soil once sodden, with Soldiers blood 
Poppies now stand, where soldiers stood. 

Where birds fly high on freedoms wing 
To greet this day, with song they sing; 
There pilots flew a perilous sky 
Poppies would sway, to wave goodbye. 

When you held the heads of tearful eyes 
They were not of men, but teenage boys; 
There dying tears, for mothers care 
Poppies would droop, in silent prayer. 

See these crosses amass of white 
further they stretch, till out of sight, 
for in this grave, is where I will be 
where my Poppy, stands, to remember me. 

D.J.Daniels
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 11:08 AM
A splendid tribute to the fallen in battle. Superb rhyming and flow. Well done David! Best wishes, Keith
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October 5, 2015 at 3:31 AM
- A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 2, 2015 at 11:27 AM
David, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Daniels Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Hi SKAT, forgive me for not introducing myself and posting a poem somewhat abruptly, Thank you for kind greet and warm welcome to Poetrysoup, I look forward to meeting the unique Poets within this forum, also, to meet friends as such as yourself, thank for sharing this big bowl of poetrysoup :)
A   Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 10:42 AM
David, this is deep.. a very good poem, I like your standing metaphors. LINDA
Daniels Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Thank you very much Linda I wrote this many, many a moon ago, Poppies was written for Rememberance Day, which is why every Rememberance Sunday I place my Poppy along with this poem at the foot of a Monument for the fallen, in Honour of there Bravery and selfless sacrifice, again, thank you for your warm and kind critique Linda :)
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