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Your eyes shine like diamonds
    your teeth gleam like pearls
  Your nose so refined
    your hair graced with curls

  I love your soft skin
    and the silky shape it's in
  So, darling, it's time to pop the question ~
    Why's your breath scare me to death?
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Tor Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:46 AM
You can't have everything, lol...
Sangster - K Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 10:44 AM
Given the healthy picture you painted re: her appearance. One can only assume it's the food she eats. Garlic breath? Lol :-)
Lawless Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 6:13 AM
because they locked up the toothpaste at CVS
M  Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 2:14 AM
Ewww and funny! Some suffer with really bad breath..that wouldn't be very nice! Debx
Rhymer Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 1:48 AM
Funny!
Cunningham Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 10:56 PM
They should have kept wearing masks mandatory lol. Tom
Chuuk Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 8:05 PM
Too funny. Lol
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