Robb A. Kopp Poet Rhyme

Poor Winner

Your visceral comments are taking on a new pitch.
Do you have some weird little glitch?
Why a you hitting me with a switch?
Your critiques don’t help to enrich.
Quit being such a troll.
Negativity takes its toll

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Robin Davis September 20, 2013 at 9:15 PM these words are so true and deep. Negativity knocks others down. we need to praise more and build people up. nice job

James Tate March 6, 2011 at 3:47 PM Yes, some critics lack tact and their comments can tear down rather that encourage improvement. Glad you pointed out the problem. Thanks for your comments on The Portrait. I had lots of joy in writing it.