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Contest: Rondelet

Sponsor: Joseph May

28 April 2025

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This is my life My life that the whiskey did choose This is my life And she my long suffering wife Her bruising left too many clues These bars now deprive me of booze This is my life

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Date: 5/10/2025 5:30:00 AM
A whole saga told in one small poem. Brilliantly written. A well deserved win.
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Date: 5/9/2025 3:12:00 PM
Too much booze will make you lose, Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/9/2025 3:13:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph, and thanks for placement.
Date: 4/27/2025 8:19:00 PM
Hey there, Terry. Where did this one come from? ~ Bob Boozer, star forward for the 1st Chicago Bulls' team in 1966-67
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