Notes About The Poem

Contest: Rondelet

Sponsor: Joseph May

28 April 2025

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Poor Me

This is my life My life that the whiskey did choose This is my life And she my long suffering wife Her bruising left too many clues These bars now deprive me of booze This is my life
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May 10, 2025 at 5:30 AM
A whole saga told in one small poem. Brilliantly written. A well deserved win.
May Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 3:12 PM
Too much booze will make you lose, Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
Flood Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 3:13 PM
Thanks, Joseph, and thanks for placement.
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April 27, 2025 at 8:19 PM
Hey there, Terry. Where did this one come from? ~ Bob Boozer, star forward for the 1st Chicago Bulls' team in 1966-67
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