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Poor Lonely Me

Woke this morning to a lonely bed Rolled over and scratched a lonely head Went to the beach to watch a lonely sea Instead a lonely sea watched a poor lonely me Tried to walk down a quiet street And it rained on poor lonely me Dipped my sorrow in ice cream That only made me hate being me Stood on a bridge and waited for glee Instead depression shadowed me So i closed my eyes and went for the leap Hoping this jump would set me FREE!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/1/2010 5:26:00 PM
Jackie~No comments on the subject matter because I loved it so much it doesn't upset me like it would others to read about the human condition named depression!I suffer from this to from time to time. Excellent poem !!!!!! Laura :)
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Date: 1/1/2010 1:37:00 PM
it won't. it'll just make it worse. cry the river. then build the bridge. after that, just get over it! don't spend life having a pity party for yourself. ------Ell
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