Poor Lady

I will not write you, poor lady Because you hide like leaf beady Caused recently uncomfortable paddy I'm tired to delve in your world faddy Logically think - we don't need each other What is the use of feeling bother? To meet us for what purpose? Our communication is a long lifeless corpse Honestly say - you don't want to communicate And remove me from Skype without hate If you offer a meeting, you'll meet my rejection This is my solid unchanged selection Even if you say "I'm ready to marry" I'll throw you away like a savory cherry

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 3/14/2018 10:58:00 AM

It s a really sad poem and you have written it really beautifully, it happens many times that one falls in love or cares while the other have no enthusiasm at all,and such a thing destroys a person so the best thing is to try your level best but if you re unable to, leave away believing that I have given my best, good luck and continue to write

Hai Hon
Date: 3/14/2018 11:49:00 AM

Thank you! You described the essence of this story. In this case, the correct struggle with passions remains and the search for real love, without the admixture of sinful passionate feelings, which destroy the peace of mind.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/27/2018 12:26:00 PM

Wow, I love the last line.. the imagery and golden pen are magnificent..

Hai Hon
Date: 2/27/2018 1:01:00 PM

Thank you very much! Stress gave rise to these lines.

Silent One

Date: 2/14/2018 7:27:00 AM

Oh how sad..

Hai Hon
Date: 2/14/2018 7:38:00 AM

Unfortunately, such a reaction arises in relation to those people who not only reject other people's feelings (everyone has the right to it), but in addition they show insensitivity and indifference in general.