Poor Children

We are the salt of the earth,
But we're treated like scum.
We don't have wealth,
But we have enough heart to get some.
We often don't get what we want.
When we do, we often flaunt.
Because for so long fortune was a ghost,
It did haunt us with stuff that we did want.
We are poor now, children
But rich in the gifts that God created us with
And won't live without numerous coins for very long
So work hard, keep your eye on the prize,
Fake it before you make it,
And be strong.


written on 9-9-04
while still a college student(student teacher)@ ULM
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 12:16 PM
unfortunaeity/unfortunately? or "Because for so long fortune was a ghost," Light & Love
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July 26, 2009 at 7:52 AM
Nice message in this one. Thankfully, God sees us through the tough times. Keep on writing. Karen
King Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 6:35 PM
As my Mum told me ... "We're not poor - we've just got no money!" Well spoken, Nicole!
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 5:33 PM
Interesting. Sara
Knox Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 4:54 PM
always work hard and keep your eye on the prize , great job :)
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