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Pools of Rain

Puddles in the woods,
From a fresh and gentle rain;
Birds bathe peacefully.

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Karl Sparks

May 4, 2009 at 11:59 PM

Either you have a vivid imagination or a beautiful home, good work

Pat Dickey

May 4, 2009 at 9:17 PM

So refreshing,quite, calming. Love it. Thanks for the comment....Pat

Charlene Bird

April 27, 2009 at 9:09 PM

A lovely write! The images are outstanding in these lines.

Emily Kroeger

April 24, 2009 at 8:35 AM

BEAUTIFUL

Michael Jordan

April 23, 2009 at 8:20 AM

Raul this haiku is excellent - such a peaceful feeling - God Bless, MJ I'm adding this to my fav poem list

Brian Strand

April 23, 2009 at 1:25 AM

Well observed Raul,a familiar scene in my garden this Spring also.As important to them as feeding them in winter.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

April 22, 2009 at 12:43 PM

These last two haikus you wrote fill me with a wonderful sense of serenity, Raul. Love the thought of the birds bathing in the rain puddles. Great image here! Love, Carolyn

April 22, 2009 at 8:52 AM

What a refreshing view. Enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Sharon Winter

April 22, 2009 at 7:17 AM

Our back yard always floods in a certain area (like it is now) and I am held captive and mesmerized when a bird comes and takes a bath there. You are seriously on a roll with your poetry! Love, Shar

L'Nass Shango

April 22, 2009 at 7:02 AM

Raul, this is a classic haiku in form and purpose, talent distinguishes you inthe art ... mastefully.

Frank F. Atanacio

April 22, 2009 at 5:28 AM

so calm this write is very calm

Lena Townsend

April 22, 2009 at 5:01 AM

A beautiful picture painted here in these lines fiend. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita

Christopher Higgins

April 22, 2009 at 4:04 AM

You have just turrned up the heat with your writing Raul..I mean that from deep in my heart..your writing has exploded in a powerful way..great imagery.