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Pools of Rain

Puddles in the woods,
From a fresh and gentle rain;
Birds bathe peacefully.

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Karl Sparks

Date: 5/4/2009 11:59:00 PM

Either you have a vivid imagination or a beautiful home, good work

Pat Dickey

Date: 5/4/2009 9:17:00 PM

So refreshing,quite, calming. Love it. Thanks for the comment....Pat

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/27/2009 9:09:00 PM

A lovely write! The images are outstanding in these lines.

Emily Kroeger

Date: 4/24/2009 8:35:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/23/2009 8:20:00 AM

Raul this haiku is excellent - such a peaceful feeling - God Bless, MJ I'm adding this to my fav poem list

Brian Strand

Date: 4/23/2009 1:25:00 AM

Well observed Raul,a familiar scene in my garden this Spring also.As important to them as feeding them in winter.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2009 12:43:00 PM

These last two haikus you wrote fill me with a wonderful sense of serenity, Raul. Love the thought of the birds bathing in the rain puddles. Great image here! Love, Carolyn

Date: 4/22/2009 8:52:00 AM

What a refreshing view. Enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/22/2009 7:17:00 AM

Our back yard always floods in a certain area (like it is now) and I am held captive and mesmerized when a bird comes and takes a bath there. You are seriously on a roll with your poetry! Love, Shar

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/22/2009 7:02:00 AM

Raul, this is a classic haiku in form and purpose, talent distinguishes you inthe art ... mastefully.

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 4/22/2009 5:28:00 AM

so calm this write is very calm

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/22/2009 5:01:00 AM

A beautiful picture painted here in these lines fiend. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/22/2009 4:04:00 AM

You have just turrned up the heat with your writing Raul..I mean that from deep in my heart..your writing has exploded in a powerful way..great imagery.