Pool
Within the depths
Of my final breath
I sink from the surface
I have nothing left
I’m suffocating under the silent tide
I try but no air can get inside
Amongst the pain
Of the water’s force
I collapse from the pressure
With no remorse
I suffocated under the silent tide
Your laughing face, as I died
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