Pontoon

Relaxing sea ride with skies of blue.
Gentle waves rock our bodies like a porch swing.
Family laughing and soaking up the sunshine.

Further along waters start to get choppy
Waves grow bigger than a garden wall
Green emerald waters broke our bow
This nearly ended a land lubbin crew
Straight to the bottom the pontoons did dive
I heard a shrill scream of terror escape
When my ankles submerged to a watery doom
I ran to the stern to get more height
Drowning was not the goal nor our plight
The pontoons began to arise like a bubble but
Our motor stalled from the severe incline.
I know now fuel don't run straight up at a ninety degree turn
We had to be at the mercy of the sea while our engine
Decided whether to trust us or not
After several harrowing moments the engine reved
We made our escape from natures deathly fury.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 14, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Doris , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
Gasun Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 8:14 PM
i held my breath while reading this awesome narrative poem of yours Doris! is this real? well, congratulations on great penning!! have a nice day! love leonora
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 2:48 PM
Did a real event inspired this poem? It's good to see that it's online Not in the depths throughout all time.
Lwele Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Nice poem.Great write Doris.
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 11:10 AM
you set the mood for light suspense and i was there with you all along, doris.. this is greeat stuff!.. hope it's fictional...:) huggs!
Horsman Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 4:41 AM
Hey Doris, this is so scary, but what a wonderful poem it turned out!!!!!!!!!
Patrikar Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 3:16 AM
scary and adventurous! liked it
Horne Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 3:02 PM
scary indeed, Doris - hope this didn't really happen
Sweetheart Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 11:27 PM
a scary ride and startling adventure on the high seas Doris .. nicely described but methinks will keep my tootsies on land ho luv ..
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 7:57 PM
Hey, what a cool escape story. Did it really happen to you? We once got caught in huge waves in a storm on Utah lake. Pretty scary stuff and our boat turned upside down!!!
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