Pondering

If only we reach in the hollows of our soul
Where no-one but we ourselves can go...

If we dig beneath all the truth and lies
If we open up to what it really implies...

We can search a life time trying to find
What was in front of us the whole time...



03/02/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 7:53 PM
I love this short write!! Bravo, well stated..
Carrillo Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 4:46 PM
This is short, but it's really good. I loved it. have a nice day...... Lucilla
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 7:41 PM
very good one, dear. Short and to the point and very wise!
Loving Iii Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 5:29 PM
i have a million things to say but this one thing i must. i see a new writer than what once was.i see rhyming and wisdom no matter what lenght be. i see someone that learned from me to a certain degree. the words are out there with wisdom you can see. still thanks for being my biggest fan. and i realize it's been a while. my niece turned 5. i think you have someone the same age too.
Squyres Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 12:50 PM
Well said... we look for keys outside when the keys to answers lie within our selves. Love this !!
Smith Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 12:48 PM
I am pondering everyday.. What a beautiful piece Phyllis...Hugs Tim
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February 3, 2014 at 12:38 PM
Phyllis, with my eyes wide open, I listen to the pondering thoughts. very deep ~ SKAT~
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 12:33 PM
- Wise words, Phyllis - Skillfully written. - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem. - Hope all is well with you. - Have a great week - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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