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Pondering

If only we reach in the hollows of our soul Where no-one but we ourselves can go... If we dig beneath all the truth and lies If we open up to what it really implies... We can search a life time trying to find What was in front of us the whole time... 03/02/14

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/11/2014 7:53:00 PM

I love this short write!! Bravo, well stated..

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/6/2014 4:46:00 PM

This is short, but it's really good. I loved it. have a nice day...... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2014 7:41:00 PM

very good one, dear. Short and to the point and very wise!

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/3/2014 5:29:00 PM

i have a million things to say but this one thing i must. i see a new writer than what once was.i see rhyming and wisdom no matter what lenght be. i see someone that learned from me to a certain degree. the words are out there with wisdom you can see. still thanks for being my biggest fan. and i realize it's been a while. my niece turned 5. i think you have someone the same age too.

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/3/2014 12:50:00 PM

Well said... we look for keys outside when the keys to answers lie within our selves. Love this !!

Tim Smith

Date: 2/3/2014 12:48:00 PM

I am pondering everyday.. What a beautiful piece Phyllis...Hugs Tim

Skat A

Date: 2/3/2014 12:38:00 PM

Phyllis, with my eyes wide open, I listen to the pondering thoughts. very deep ~ SKAT~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2014 12:33:00 PM

- Wise words, Phyllis - Skillfully written. - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem. - Hope all is well with you. - Have a great week - oxox // Anne-Lise :)