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Pond of Truth

Paddling over lies 

In search of truth's pond to find

My oars were broken!




© Demetrios Trifiatis
       31  July 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

August 2, 2015 at 9:02 AM

Good one Demetrios!

Andrea Dietrich

August 1, 2015 at 1:15 PM

this is DEEP!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 1, 2015 at 3:22 PM

Andrea, what a marvelous visit is it! Thank you so much for your precious comment!

Gary Bateman

July 31, 2015 at 11:20 AM

Hello Demetrios!! You are absolutely spot-on with your Haiku write here. Lies are scourge of mankind. Very Well-Done and a "7"!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 1, 2015 at 4:26 AM

Mein freund, Gary, es freuts mich sehr dein comment to receive. Thank you so much for your evaluation. Very generous!

Jan Allison

July 31, 2015 at 9:01 AM

I can relate to this one - sadly i am still paddling:-( hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 1, 2015 at 4:27 AM

Thank you dear, Jan, for your visit and comment. I think we all relate to that, one way or the other.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 31, 2015 at 6:29 AM

- Lying hurts .... superbly written, dear Demetrios - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 31, 2015 at 7:42 AM

Thank you my, dearest Anne-Lise for your beautiful comment! A nice weekend to you too!

Nette Onclaud

July 31, 2015 at 5:57 AM

what a surprising end line.. well done, D.. huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 31, 2015 at 7:44 AM

Well, that is what all Haiku is about: to have a twist. Isn't it? Thank you so much, dear Nette!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 31, 2015 at 5:29 AM

Oh great Demetrios, precise yet heavier on life's philosophy! Great thoughts!

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 31, 2015 at 5:33 AM

From time to time I have to justify my title of the Dr. of Philosophy in Philosophy, Dr. Upma! Ha-ha. Thank you for your visit and your precious comment!

Afolabi Muideen

July 31, 2015 at 2:06 AM

Excellence write sir, I believe lie is like a horse and can run up a mile within a minute but truth is a snail. No matter how fast lie can run his bones would soon weary and snail without a bone she would meet him on his posture. Powerful well constructed. Wise one...........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 1, 2015 at 4:24 AM

Thank you my friend, A.M., for your wonderful story and for your visit. It is so kind of you!

Pond of Truth

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