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Pond of Truth

Paddling over lies In search of truth's pond to find My oars were broken! © Demetrios Trifiatis 31 July 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/2/2015 9:02:00 AM

Good one Demetrios!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2015 1:15:00 PM

this is DEEP!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/1/2015 3:22:00 PM

Andrea, what a marvelous visit is it! Thank you so much for your precious comment!

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/31/2015 11:20:00 AM

Hello Demetrios!! You are absolutely spot-on with your Haiku write here. Lies are scourge of mankind. Very Well-Done and a "7"!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/1/2015 4:26:00 AM

Mein freund, Gary, es freuts mich sehr dein comment to receive. Thank you so much for your evaluation. Very generous!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2015 9:01:00 AM

I can relate to this one - sadly i am still paddling:-( hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/1/2015 4:27:00 AM

Thank you dear, Jan, for your visit and comment. I think we all relate to that, one way or the other.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2015 6:29:00 AM

- Lying hurts .... superbly written, dear Demetrios - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2015 7:42:00 AM

Thank you my, dearest Anne-Lise for your beautiful comment! A nice weekend to you too!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/31/2015 5:57:00 AM

what a surprising end line.. well done, D.. huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2015 7:44:00 AM

Well, that is what all Haiku is about: to have a twist. Isn't it? Thank you so much, dear Nette!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/31/2015 5:29:00 AM

Oh great Demetrios, precise yet heavier on life's philosophy! Great thoughts!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2015 5:33:00 AM

From time to time I have to justify my title of the Dr. of Philosophy in Philosophy, Dr. Upma! Ha-ha. Thank you for your visit and your precious comment!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/31/2015 2:06:00 AM

Excellence write sir, I believe lie is like a horse and can run up a mile within a minute but truth is a snail. No matter how fast lie can run his bones would soon weary and snail without a bone she would meet him on his posture. Powerful well constructed. Wise one...........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/1/2015 4:24:00 AM

Thank you my friend, A.M., for your wonderful story and for your visit. It is so kind of you!