Pond Disturbance - Haiku

Pond Disturbance - Haiku

pond remains still born
clear, no bottom, quiet, cold
wind folds a ripple
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 20, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Hi, Earl, I enjoyed reading your pond haiku. Especially liked how you ended it with the ripple of the wind. Blessings, Darlene
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April 20, 2015 at 9:12 PM
Hi Darlene, Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate your comments. I am glad you enjoyed my haiku. Have a great evening. Take care. Earl
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