Pond

group of lily pads floating

small fish are jumping for bugs

murky water clouds your view


                    P.R.Deremer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Singh Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 4:25 AM
nicely written
Deremer Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Thank you.
Tor Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 1:38 AM
Love the imagery Pam.
Callus Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 9:33 AM
You present a lovely image, Pam. ~ All the best:) // paul
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