Polyphony/Poems of Sabushanmughom

DAMSELS IN KUTTANAD

In Kuttanad
The damsels
Never outruns girlhood.

Like lakes,
Stirs in gentle breeze.

In the brook
Perches becomes stars
At their sight.

At the twinkling anklets
Water lilies flushed.

From the untied hair
The blackened shadows flies.
Seeing the ebony bossom
The sky bloomed wide. 

TIME

Time
The turbid water
Everyone catches fish.

I'm waiting
turn to come.

FANTACY

Her cotton sari
Ensnared the city
Hands spirited
Neck sought to strangle
Legs fly
Hair soar madness
Ears melted cell phones
Heart collapsed the sky.

DISTORTED

Arabian sea
Encroached the city
With chopped head
And swelled legs.

Clouds fought like black cats
Spirit scented rain raged on.

The world lay
As if in a morgue
Varied dance accrued
Atop it.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Shanmughom Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 6:35 PM
THANKS FOR ALL VALUABLE COMMENTS.
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 6:37 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sabu. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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July 18, 2010 at 10:41 PM
Wonderful write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is very beautifully expressed!!!!!!!!!! Welcome and write more!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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July 18, 2010 at 2:18 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. Family.. so enjoyed reading your most creative couplet write.. with luv..
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