Pollution

Black smoke covers all
children animals run
but they can't escape
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Merryman Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 4:09 PM
Congrats on your HM in PD's contest, Courtney! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Courtney. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on your poem, Courtney. I enjoyed the read.
Taylor Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Congrats on your win, Court. Excellent. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
A   Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 10:57 PM
COURTNEY, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
Sweetheart Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 2:54 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. enjoy the site with its many features as u share words with luv..
Webb Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 2:42 AM
Thanks! Means a lot :)
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 6:56 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Courtney. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Webb Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 2:41 AM
Thanks so much! hope you enjoyed! I'll be sure to check out your work as well!
A   Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 11:47 PM
C Webb, great haiku, tough situation. Thank you for sharing your haiku. Have a nice and wonderful-day,..p.d.
Webb Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 11:49 PM
thanks its my first :) i hope you have a wonderful day yourself!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace