Sam Kauffman Poet Rhyme

Polkadot Polka

Polkadot Polka

Tumbling, whirling, smiling, swirling –
 A riot of laughter – orderly rows well crafted.

Swaying, dancing, toe tapping, prancing –
 Rainbows of color –freckles in technicolor.

Jumping, leaping, playing not creeping –
 Like leap frog, per chance – a spinning top dance?

Glistening, glimmering, sparkling, shimmering -
 Not hidden from sight – bright points of light.

Grinning, giggling, bouncing, wiggling –
 Perfect circles smiling – can’t help styling.

Tiny, small, big but not tall –
 Sometimes gigantic – known for their antics.

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Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 12:51 PM Sam, congratulations on your very deserved 1st win, very creative and a win truly deserved. Excellent write. Blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf April 23, 2020 at 9:09 PM Wow! Congratulations on your #1 top win, Sam. You are on a roll! Take care, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 22, 2020 at 4:58 PM I love this beautiful poem, Sam. The imagery is just dazzling, and it's filled with action and color. Congratulations on your win. Best of wishes. Sam Kauffman April 23, 2020 at 2:34 PM I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you, as always, for your supportive messages. So appreciated. Was really happy with the movement in this poem - and the fun - the invitation to put on our dancing shoes and take a twirl around the dance floor! After all this sitting I definitely need the exercise!

Greg Gaul April 22, 2020 at 10:13 AM Interesting form. Lotsa fun. Kept me spinning. Congrats. Sam Kauffman April 22, 2020 at 2:27 PM Greetings Greg! So glad you had fun with this poem. Yes, the format is different. As I mentioned to Ann it took me awhile to put words to the Polka! Save me a spin around the dance floor!

Ann Gilmour April 8, 2020 at 3:00 AM Wow, I loved your polkadot polka Sam, especially the line 'freckles in technicolour '. Wonderful imagery bringing the dance and the dots to life... Many congrats on your win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Sam Kauffman April 22, 2020 at 2:22 PM Many thanks Ann! It took me awhile to conjure up images of polkadots dancing then add the words, but it was a fun dance. Be safe and well. Take a little spin around your garden! Blessings and hugs!

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2020 at 6:12 PM A wonderful win. I can hear the music. Wish I could dance the dance. Enjoy your win...... Sam Kauffman April 22, 2020 at 2:19 PM Just put on your dancing shoes and take a turn around the living room. I don't think anyone will see your dance to your music! Thank you Paula. Enjoyed writing this rollicking rhyme!

Panagiota Romios April 4, 2020 at 7:06 PM How fun, Sam! Panagiota Romios Sam Kauffman April 4, 2020 at 10:13 PM Hi Panagiota, Thank you! So good to hear from you. Polkadots have always looked like a party to me. Hope you are doing well. Stay well. Be blessed!

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2020 at 1:15 PM the word that springs to my mind for this one is ADORABLE. I am picturing the polka dots as little girls! Sam Kauffman March 29, 2020 at 1:20 PM Love your image of the polkadots! Thank you dear friend for sharing your vision! Take good care. Have a wonderful weekend!

Sandra Adams March 28, 2020 at 10:02 PM your words dance right off the page...such a fun read tonight Sam :) hugs and blessings Sam Kauffman March 28, 2020 at 10:25 PM Thank you Sandra. I am go glad this little poem was a cheery moment for you. I am so appreciative of your visit. hugs and blessings! Stay healthy!

John Watt March 28, 2020 at 5:32 PM These wonderful words just trip off your pen (reminding me of your rain poem 'And We Call It') in such a playful way, perfect for describing polka dots. I love "Rainbows of color –freckles in technicolor". Your fun writes are really helping me through this pandemic, Sam. Muchas gracias ~ John Sam Kauffman March 28, 2020 at 10:22 PM Hi John, what a lovely message! Yes, this is a little like And We Call It. For me raindrops and polkadots are just plain fun. I wanted to convey that whimsy. Thank you for letting me know this lifted your spirits in this chaos! You are welcome! This was a fun write!

Jan Allison March 28, 2020 at 5:13 PM what a fun uplifting poem, your words dance off the page Sam:-) hugs Jan xx Sam Kauffman March 29, 2020 at 1:58 AM Thank you so much Jan. So glad you are joining, and enjoying, the "dance." Hope you are doing well now that the bridge is up and you are quarantined! Think of you. Be blessed with joy and peace, my friend.