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Polka Dots

Upon a gentle summer breeze

 Its wings of polka dots I see

 I watch it flutter through the trees

 Upon a gentle summer breeze

 A butterfly flutters with ease

 It dances 'neath the sky so free

 Upon a gentle summer breeze

 Its wings of polka dots I see
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1-10-19
 Polka Dots Contest
 Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Alexis Y. Date: 1/24/2019 12:24:00 AM Hi Joseph, This is so lovely. Nice imagery. It looks amazing. Congratulations on your win. It was deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 1/22/2019 5:55:00 PM Congratulations on your win in my contest, Joseph!:) Nicely done Triolet! Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 1/22/2019 6:57:00 PM Thank you for my placement Edward..

P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:42:00 AM I love this! "upon a gentle summer breeze" (sigh) and polka dots and butterflies!!! this is a FAVE for me! good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 1/17/2019 10:40:00 AM Thank you for making it a fave P.S.

Silent One Date: 1/12/2019 12:45:00 PM Nice theme for the contest... It was like your words took me there.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/11/2019 7:58:00 PM you chose a great form for polka dots, Joseph. Probably I would have done the same. I'll have to think of a completely different way to represent the polka dots if I go with triolet though!! WELL done. Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 1/10/2019 9:57:00 PM Such a delicate poem with a lilting rhythm, Joseph! Enjoyed this and good luck in the contest! :) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 1/10/2019 8:19:00 PM Joseph, like the form .. the imagery is great.. Good luck in the contest. Love the imagery. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/10/2019 4:56:00 PM A pleasant read..well written poem, Joseph. Login to Reply