Polka Dots

Upon a gentle summer breeze Its wings of polka dots I see I watch it flutter through the trees Upon a gentle summer breeze A butterfly flutters with ease It dances 'neath the sky so free Upon a gentle summer breeze Its wings of polka dots I see ~ ~ 1-10-19 Polka Dots Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Alexis Y.

Date: 1/24/2019 12:24:00 AM

Hi Joseph, This is so lovely. Nice imagery. It looks amazing. Congratulations on your win. It was deserved:-) Alexis

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/22/2019 5:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in my contest, Joseph!:) Nicely done Triolet!

Joseph May
Date: 1/22/2019 6:57:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Edward..

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/17/2019 8:42:00 AM

I love this! "upon a gentle summer breeze" (sigh) and polka dots and butterflies!!! this is a FAVE for me! good luck in the contest!

Joseph May
Date: 1/17/2019 10:40:00 AM

Thank you for making it a fave P.S.

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2019 12:45:00 PM

Nice theme for the contest... It was like your words took me there..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2019 7:58:00 PM

you chose a great form for polka dots, Joseph. Probably I would have done the same. I'll have to think of a completely different way to represent the polka dots if I go with triolet though!! WELL done.

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/10/2019 9:57:00 PM

Such a delicate poem with a lilting rhythm, Joseph! Enjoyed this and good luck in the contest! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/10/2019 8:19:00 PM

Joseph, like the form .. the imagery is great.. Good luck in the contest. Love the imagery. Hugs Eve ~`*

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/10/2019 4:56:00 PM

A pleasant read..well written poem, Joseph.