Poker Night

The house is full of Kings and Queens.
For each other thrive on whats unseen.
While each of them believe their aces.
It boils down to stories on their faces.
Playing each hand as though its won,
before the round starts and the flop is done.
Can't you feel the twitch we see.
Tells us all that we should flee.
Your subtle gasp while placing chips so rough.
It is a sign of another weak bluff.
Those who stay await the turn
to look for the card to make others spurn.
The deck has fewer of what you need.
At this point the smart will concede.
Those who remain understand the odds.
The river may cause a curse of their god.
The hand is over now all is seen.
Did they read right the tells that were noticed by the keen.
Their house is full of Kings and Queens.
Only to lose to all the Aces, how mean!

DAMN YOU RIVER RAT!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Fisher Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 2:32 PM
Way to go on the contest. Nice description of a tough to win game.
Hapworth Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 10:49 PM
Thanks David. Those are the kinds of hands that keep me playing :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 4:24 AM
Congratulations Adam xx
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December 13, 2013 at 7:37 AM
Thanks Mandy :)
Ligon Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Nice descriptions. Congrats, Adam!
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December 12, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Thank you :)
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 7:58 PM
Congrats on your win, Adam
Hapworth Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram
Bantawa Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 1:56 PM
congrats on your win!
Hapworth Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 2:17 PM
Thank you
Konos Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 12:10 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
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December 12, 2013 at 1:29 PM
Thank you for enjoying :)
Davis Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 8:54 PM
cute and humorous poem. It gives the reader a reason to smile and chuckle. nice job
Hapworth Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 6:33 PM
My poker buddy was teasing me when I first started writing. He told me to write him a poem, so I did this in 20 min :)
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