Poison

When I was just a young boy 
I liked to wear my blue jeans.
I liked to stand on the corner, 
I liked to spit on the street.
There was nothing to do and I did it well
Work just wasn’t for me
I only put effort into breaking a window
Or looking for something to steal
I drove my poor mother crazy
Oh son what will you be?
Little did poor mother know
That the devil would soon come for me.

I met him one cool afternoon
It could have been autumn or spring
He said son take my hand
I’ll make you a man
And he handed a bottle to me.
What had he done to this water? 
It was brown and filthy and stank
I thought what the hell,
Whats the worst that can happen?
So I tipped my head back and drank.

Hi ho the devil
The devil he came for me
He brought a bottle of poison 
And he handed the bottle to me.

Twenty five years later
I came to my senses
and wondered what had I done
my hands were smashed,
my face was scarred
my memories mostly were gone:
but the devil had done me a favour,
and left me with some of the bad ones. 
But he’d taken my family and wife
He’d taken my job and my home
He’d left me gambling debts
And a record as long as my arm

Now if I may warn the young
It’ll be the only good thing that I’ve done:
Theres no such thing as the lord up above
Theres no heaven waiting for anyone.
But right at this moment the devils somewhere
Preparing a bottle for someone.
So take his hand if you feel like a man
You’ll have an adventure for sure
But if youre one of the unlucky ones
Be ready to walk through Hells door.

Hi ho the devil
The devil he came for me
He brought a bottle of poison
And he handed the bottle to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 5, 2015 at 5:24 AM
- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Bryn - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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January 2, 2015 at 10:58 PM
Bryn, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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January 2, 2015 at 8:15 PM
The battle of addiction is always an uphill battle and a struggle. The temptation, frustration and pain is described nicely in your poem.
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