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Black water
Enters the system
Leaves decay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/15/2011 10:15:00 PM
Great one! Keep writing! :) Always, Laura
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Date: 10/25/2011 7:45:00 AM
This is a powerful haiku. What is the "Black Water" a metaphor for? As to my poem I think I was trying to show that lepoards don's change their spots just like that. I don't condone piracy but I do like reading novels about it. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/23/2011 12:53:00 PM
our world,, slipping in to a system of death... love your senryu... and thank you for your comments.. always,..p.d.
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Date: 9/21/2011 7:41:00 PM
We have a wild storm here tonight and the black night water is indeed ripping the leaves off. Great description of a storm Hussain. Hope you can post soon, I'm on the third time around reading!
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Date: 9/19/2011 2:39:00 PM
Interesting penned work..Sara
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:45:00 PM
I gather you refer to the notorious Black Water Agence with questionable operations globally. I have read some research material on them and I must say your poetry describes them spot on! Very good write with a moral from it for us all.
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:06:00 PM
wanna check out this ref... so little money, so little time...
Date: 9/16/2011 12:42:00 PM
Hey Hussain, diggin' your stuff, especially like this one. Thanks for stopping by earlier and commenting. I added a coupla vids to the "about this poem" click on my hicks and oreilly poem if you're interested. Happy day~N
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Date: 9/13/2011 4:12:00 PM
Superb lines of expression and an ultra cool title M. Hussain.... visuals beyond compare.. thankxx for enjoying my contest entry.. the photo on John's blog is gorgeous to view luv..
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:27:00 PM
A lovely Senryu, Hussain, I am impressed. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. I am grateful to you for your comments.
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