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Black water Enters the system Leaves decay

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/15/2011 10:15:00 PM

Great one! Keep writing! :) Always, Laura

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/25/2011 7:45:00 AM

This is a powerful haiku. What is the "Black Water" a metaphor for? As to my poem I think I was trying to show that lepoards don's change their spots just like that. I don't condone piracy but I do like reading novels about it. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2011 12:53:00 PM

our world,, slipping in to a system of death... love your senryu... and thank you for your comments.. always,..p.d.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/21/2011 7:41:00 PM

We have a wild storm here tonight and the black night water is indeed ripping the leaves off. Great description of a storm Hussain. Hope you can post soon, I'm on the third time around reading!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2011 2:39:00 PM

Interesting penned work..Sara

Mohammad Taha Effendi

Date: 9/16/2011 1:45:00 PM

I gather you refer to the notorious Black Water Agence with questionable operations globally. I have read some research material on them and I must say your poetry describes them spot on! Very good write with a moral from it for us all.

Nancy Jones
Date: 9/19/2011 10:06:00 PM

wanna check out this ref... so little money, so little time...

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/16/2011 12:42:00 PM

Hey Hussain, diggin' your stuff, especially like this one. Thanks for stopping by earlier and commenting. I added a coupla vids to the "about this poem" click on my hicks and oreilly poem if you're interested. Happy day~N

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/13/2011 4:12:00 PM

Superb lines of expression and an ultra cool title M. Hussain.... visuals beyond compare.. thankxx for enjoying my contest entry.. the photo on John's blog is gorgeous to view luv..

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/12/2011 1:27:00 PM

A lovely Senryu, Hussain, I am impressed. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. I am grateful to you for your comments.