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Poison

Black water
Enters the system
Leaves decay

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Laura Breidenthal

December 15, 2011 at 10:15 PM

Great one! Keep writing! :) Always, Laura

Matthew Anish

October 25, 2011 at 7:45 AM

This is a powerful haiku. What is the "Black Water" a metaphor for? As to my poem I think I was trying to show that lepoards don's change their spots just like that. I don't condone piracy but I do like reading novels about it. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

October 23, 2011 at 12:53 PM

our world,, slipping in to a system of death... love your senryu... and thank you for your comments.. always,..p.d.

Elizabeth Wesley

September 21, 2011 at 7:41 PM

We have a wild storm here tonight and the black night water is indeed ripping the leaves off. Great description of a storm Hussain. Hope you can post soon, I'm on the third time around reading!

Sara Kendrick

September 19, 2011 at 2:39 PM

Interesting penned work..Sara

Mohammad Taha Effendi

September 16, 2011 at 1:45 PM

I gather you refer to the notorious Black Water Agence with questionable operations globally. I have read some research material on them and I must say your poetry describes them spot on! Very good write with a moral from it for us all.

Nancy Jones

September 19, 2011 at 10:06 PM

wanna check out this ref... so little money, so little time...

Nancy Jones

September 16, 2011 at 12:42 PM

Hey Hussain, diggin' your stuff, especially like this one. Thanks for stopping by earlier and commenting. I added a coupla vids to the "about this poem" click on my hicks and oreilly poem if you're interested. Happy day~N

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 13, 2011 at 4:12 PM

Superb lines of expression and an ultra cool title M. Hussain.... visuals beyond compare.. thankxx for enjoying my contest entry.. the photo on John's blog is gorgeous to view luv..