Poised

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     Calm and self assured
polished with glittering leaves
       Eve stood by Adam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 4:24 AM
This was a shock to them. You presented it nicely. Keep writing. Sara
Lopez Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 9:42 AM
this is a great haiku . I love this format of poetry......great vision.....
Maughan Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 6:21 AM
I am there..very nice... It doesn`t take many words or actions to sting~ Hugs, Robin
Burton Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 4:46 PM
After they sinned? I see here their already covering their selfs in shame. Enjoyed this short powerful piece. Enjoy your day.
Guzzi Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 4:33 PM
erect beautiful nude and adorned in moonlight Eve lay clothing Adam
Devonshire Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 4:21 PM
How beautifully you describe Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden! Too bad Eve fell prey to temptation. Great haiku, James! Love, Carolyn
Smalling Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 3:23 PM
I can see it in a frame ... light and love.
Moreno Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 1:16 PM
Stunning work, great use of imagery...Raul
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