Poised

. Calm and self assured polished with glittering leaves Eve stood by Adam

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2009 4:24:00 AM

This was a shock to them. You presented it nicely. Keep writing. Sara

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/25/2009 9:42:00 AM

this is a great haiku . I love this format of poetry......great vision.....

Robin Maughan

Date: 4/19/2009 6:21:00 AM

I am there..very nice... It doesn`t take many words or actions to sting~ Hugs, Robin

Derrick Burton

Date: 4/17/2009 4:46:00 PM

After they sinned? I see here their already covering their selfs in shame. Enjoyed this short powerful piece. Enjoy your day.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/17/2009 4:33:00 PM

erect beautiful nude and adorned in moonlight Eve lay clothing Adam

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2009 4:21:00 PM

How beautifully you describe Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden! Too bad Eve fell prey to temptation. Great haiku, James! Love, Carolyn

David Smalling

Date: 4/17/2009 3:23:00 PM

I can see it in a frame ... light and love.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/17/2009 1:16:00 PM

Stunning work, great use of imagery...Raul