Points, Endings and Immortaliy

Writing songs without beginning
that lie within my silent entrails
About this never ending process
black and white

Decreased myselves, as seen in others

Songs that whisper softly
about potency
in the midst of my resignation

Semi-transparent visions I almost gave up

Points, endings and immortality
all drifting on my lake

2014
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Nyaga Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Nel.. an intriguing piece still mulling on its meanings.. //blessing
Gru Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 4:24 AM
Thank you! I could explain it but that would be no fun ;)
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