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Pointing At the Truth

the pen mightier in our right or left hand ~ more likely the wrong hands ALL YOURS (APR 30) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand N/A 30/04/2021 Syllable counter PS 17

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/27/2021 7:28:00 AM

Excellente, David. Wish I had thought of that!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/27/2021 8:03:00 AM

Sometimes Milton when I’m starting a poem, these ku’s, can jump out, quite serendipitously and take on a life of there own, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/27/2021 2:55:00 AM

This is the most potent monoku ever ( 17 syllables). It holds the essence of all beings since their conception; all history, civilizations, wars, truces, justice, and injustice depend on who is behind the pen and how genuinely he is displaying it to the desired purpose. Have a great day my friend David

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/27/2021 3:36:00 AM

Thank you Lassad, you have made my day with that comment, You read it exactly as I intended it to be, the power is in the position and the integrity of the writer countless millions have been killed by the ink of corruption and hatred, cheers David