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Point Of View Seeing you Seeing me Ecstasy! Written for Black Eyed Susan's Senryu Contest 10/08/13

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Date: 11/11/2013 8:21:00 PM
I enjoyed your senryu! Congrats, John!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/9/2013 10:51:00 AM
Nice one John,,, seeing is everything...congrats, xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/8/2013 8:27:00 AM
Very Nice John.Congrats on the win.
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Date: 11/7/2013 11:11:00 PM
wonderful Senryu John, Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/7/2013 3:46:00 PM
a very unusual one and I don't care what they say, I sure enjoy sometimes seeing a rhyming senryu! Congrats in the winners' circel.
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John Posey
Date: 11/7/2013 6:20:00 PM
Well, I've butchered haikus in the past.... Now I've slaughtered senryus...Can I ever be forgiven? Thanks for your support... and Here, take this gun... we may have to shoot our way outa this mess.....Jake
Date: 10/17/2013 7:05:00 AM
Nothing like that look! Great job Jake....
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John Posey
Date: 10/17/2013 11:55:00 AM
Thanks, sweetheart.... You light up my life.... Jake
Date: 10/14/2013 5:37:00 AM
Creative entry..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2013 4:53:00 AM
Ecstacy for sure! Seeing yourself in a positive lite in the eyes and soul of another... Sounds like a man in love to me...Luck in the contest - Tim
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Date: 10/9/2013 9:27:00 PM
I haven't seen a new poem from you in awhile. I am not familiar with this form, but I did like this poem. You say so much with just a few words. It is an amazing thing, when we find another person who understands us, and excepts us for who we are. Terrific work, Jake! I wish you good luck in the contest!
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