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Point Of View

Seeing you
Seeing me
Ecstasy!

Written for Black Eyed Susan's
Senryu Contest 
10/08/13

emotionssenryu

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

November 11, 2013 at 8:21 PM

I enjoyed your senryu! Congrats, John!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

November 9, 2013 at 10:51 AM

Nice one John,,, seeing is everything...congrats, xox~ LINDA

Kash Poet

November 8, 2013 at 8:27 AM

Very Nice John.Congrats on the win.

Skat A

November 7, 2013 at 11:11 PM

wonderful Senryu John, Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

November 7, 2013 at 3:46 PM

a very unusual one and I don't care what they say, I sure enjoy sometimes seeing a rhyming senryu! Congrats in the winners' circel.

John Posey

November 7, 2013 at 6:20 PM

Well, I've butchered haikus in the past.... Now I've slaughtered senryus...Can I ever be forgiven? Thanks for your support... and Here, take this gun... we may have to shoot our way outa this mess.....Jake

Donna Jones

October 17, 2013 at 7:05 AM

Nothing like that look! Great job Jake....

John Posey

October 17, 2013 at 11:55 AM

Thanks, sweetheart.... You light up my life.... Jake

Sara Kendrick

October 14, 2013 at 5:37 AM

Creative entry..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Tim Ryerson

October 10, 2013 at 4:53 AM

Ecstacy for sure! Seeing yourself in a positive lite in the eyes and soul of another... Sounds like a man in love to me...Luck in the contest - Tim

Kelly Deschler

October 9, 2013 at 9:27 PM

I haven't seen a new poem from you in awhile. I am not familiar with this form, but I did like this poem. You say so much with just a few words. It is an amazing thing, when we find another person who understands us, and excepts us for who we are. Terrific work, Jake! I wish you good luck in the contest!

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