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I,my eye,saw a good man doing some thing evil, out of love... i saw a "big bad man" give food to his family.. selling drugs...selling drugs and when he got arrested all his daughter really wanted was to give a hug...give a hug "mr.goodguy" bought a gun and started acting like a thug...kinda like a thug *sirens* dang...bang,bang a rookie cop noticed they were both the same "maine",man... put his mug shot all in the news,and the networks... got 25 views... the judge said "who is this young man to you?" his daughter screamed out "let me go,thats my daddy" "rookie cop" mumbled,"bastered..almost had me" they threw the book at him while he took "the time",sadly amen??

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Date: 4/26/2012 11:26:00 AM
Nice piece, I like your poem. xoxo - Laila
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Date: 4/26/2012 9:48:00 AM
Well written. I like it.
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Book: Shattered Sighs