Point For Exclamation - For Jan

!, !... !(!)

Not in title'd
her **** fell flat

Jan's great title
lacked impact

I've got blue ****
so matter of fact

no choice but to shout it
BLUE **** IN ALL CAPS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 7:09 PM
This you'll have to repeat // With a poem about a blue cow teat...Whoa, sister! :) Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 7:10 AM
Oh, funny you should say that, I have written of cow and teat, an old poem, one of my first posted "Oxymooron the Cannibal Cow" ;) mo!
Krampe Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Haha :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 6:29 AM
;p xo!
Michael Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 4:50 AM
Extempo...an art in dialog...response poetry...I like it...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 6:26 AM
Birds of blue feathers... chuckling together ;) Cheers dear! xomo!
Ashley Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Lol! Maureen, such an awesome addendum to Jan's poem. Your keen wit and golden pen are ever at the ready :)) Warmest wishes and hugs, my lovely <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 6:25 AM
Giggles! Irresistible ;) Thank you lovely! xomo <3
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 4:51 PM
ha ha ha but I've got Blue Tits and I've got to tell the world lol:-) hugs jan x
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Like I say, "tits to the wind"! <3 <3 <3
Gauthier Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:29 PM
LOL - you felt inspired, Maureen !
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Totally! ;)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:05 PM
LOL, very funny!
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April 19, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Funny begets funny ;) xomo!
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