Poet's Dozen 1958

It wasn't quite love
   When i fell head over heels
   As she tripped me up
   Regaining my feet, when holding her hand
   We danced to the beat, of a rock and roll band
   Escorting her home, a teenage romance
   Began late that night, with a kiss,our first date.
   Engaged to be married, two faiths joined at last.
   Overcoming misfortune, and bannishing fears.
   Our children adore it, when we talk of the past.
   Nostalgia is sweet, with laughter and tears,
   That come with our marriage of fifty five years.


   1/ 1/ 2016.
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Smith Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 3:01 AM
Magic. Simple and uncomplicated piece written with heart so we can feel the love. Best regards David in NZ
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January 16, 2016 at 7:21 PM
George, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~
Scars Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Congrats on your placement :)-*smiles*
A  Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:39 PM
George, Congrats on your win. SKAT
Roper Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Congratulations on your win, George, love your first date imagery.
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 3:22 PM
WOW 55 years George - what lovely memories and a great poem for the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Seal Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Hi Jan, yes 55 and not out, thats for keeping a straight bat since my maiden bowled me over. Thankyou for your kind remarks about my poem. My warmest regards to you. George.
Fleming Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 3:01 PM
What a lovely little poem! George, this was indeed a treat to read...elegantly penned! My best regards to you and your own in the forth coming New Year. :) john
Seal Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Hello John, i must thank you for being so generous with all of the comments about my poem. My warmest regards to you for doing so. Best wishesfor the New Year. George.
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