Poet's Daffodil

At the crystal lake where Narcissus once gazed at his reflection stands a handsome flower with a white silken face and golden eye. I can hear Echo’s voice on the wind which wails forlornly. *Poet's Daffodil’s bright yellow eye watches me intently. Pen in hand - pondering how vanity left beauty in its stead - I sit and now start writing as the flower nods approval. Written Feb. 28, 2012 for Francine Robert's *****willows or daffodils Poetry Contest *Poet's Daffodil is Narcissus poeticus, one of the first daffodils to be cultivated. It is associated with the Greek legend of Narcissus.
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Roske Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 10:46 AM
nicely painted picture - enjoyed this very much.
Arno Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 6:17 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win! Jon
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 6:34 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 1:34 PM
I knew this would be a winner, Andrea. Congratulations on taking first place! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 10:00 AM
congrats Andrea on a fab first place win for lovely daffodils luv.. soup mail..
Babcock Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 9:01 AM
An excellent poem Andrea. As to scary movies my brothers and friends used to scare me at drive ins. They would sneak up to the car and on a scary part knock and make a face in the window. Maybe that is why I don't like scary movies. eh? love phyl
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations on this winning piece Andrea very nice xx
Onclaud Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 12:09 AM
i liked this the first time around, andie.. happy congrats on your stunning win :) huggs
Roberts Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 11:49 PM
congrats Andrea on your first place win in the contest, beautifully done
Edwards Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 3:20 AM
Stunning Andy.. really lovely xxx Hugs
Susan Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 7:08 PM
thanks for the heads up on my color poem. that is the 2nd time this week i haven't followed the directions. what is wrong with my brain? anyway, this is a nice pensive write w/great color. hope she likes it...
Horne Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 12:29 PM
I love daffodils and I love this clever write, my friend
Guzzi Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 5:26 AM
PS your email is not working for me. Send me a new email so I can give you the info on how to insert the photo's. Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 5:18 AM
wonderful write great use of form [re:photo and judging I don't know Andie iff the photo shows for the judges BUT my writes are meant to stand alone without the picture. I get the picture frrom the write not the other way around. I will glady help you learn to insert a picture.] Light & Love
Bauer Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 3:58 PM
wonderful! i love how you incorporated the myth into your poem. great last line, too! good luck in the contest!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 2:45 PM
superb i,agery and a very creative flow of these poet daffodils Andrea.. how unique to beispired by this lovely flower .. good luck in contest luv..
Kendrick Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 1:19 PM
Creative work that should be in winners' circle..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I do enjoy seeing those Narcissus or Paper Whites and the aroma is wonderful..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you now eat healthy and get in a treat once in awhile..That makes life interesting...Sara
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February 29, 2012 at 12:54 PM
What a lovely portarait of yor day by the lake and I like the way you called the poet "Daffodil." Great analogy for the inspiration we receive from nature. Best wishes in Francine's contes, Andrea. Love, Carolyn
Dailey Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 12:00 PM
They do appear to look at you - even turning their heads from time to time as the sun's shadow moves about. Mike
Freeman Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Nice Sijo-effect Andrea. Thanks for comment. The best to you. Agape, Moses
Horsman Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 10:00 AM
what a wonderful theme, i can imagine AD as the queen of flowers, unique is this Andrea, really like this. good luck. harry
Anish Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 7:29 AM
Beautiful image of a slice of nature here! I have something like that in my new chapbook"Recent Visions". Keep up the fine poetry! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Poet Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 5:26 AM
Very good imagery here Andrea.Love your approach to the contest.Best wishes.
Williams Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 4:34 AM
Andrea great theme, wonderful flow, best of luck..David
Williams Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 4:26 AM
Wonderful reference to Narcissus, a superb entry for the contest. Best wishes
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