Margarita Lillico Poet Rhyme

Poet's Angst

Fear not that critique whittles my will, 
Fear that lack of such may wilt my quill. 

Fear not a lonely path in the dark,
Fear my pyro craft runs out of spark.

Fear not golden age’s silent byplay,
Fear that wondering mind goes astray. 

Fear not that I find I don't belong,
Fear I won't find lyrics to my song. 

March 13, 2023

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Katharine L. Sparrow March 21, 2023 at 4:28 PM The challenges that present themselves to us poets! Especially we who are older. A creative way to express a poet's struggle, almost as a metaphor for our life's struggles as well. Nicely done. Margarita Lillico March 21, 2023 at 4:34 PM Thank you! I wasn’t a poet when I was younger, was too busy except for fun rhymes in the far past. Perhaps those evolved:)

Gershon Wolf March 15, 2023 at 7:42 PM I like the way you juxtaposed 'Fear not' and 'Fear.' And you nailed 'what to fear' every time. Smiles, Gershon

Jim Slaughter March 14, 2023 at 11:02 AM Seems to me, Margarita, that your "quill" is in pretty good shape. Margarita Lillico March 14, 2023 at 12:00 PM Requires regular polishing:) Thank you!

Daniel Turner March 13, 2023 at 2:23 PM From what I've read of your writings, I don't think you need to start worrying anytime soon, Maggie. I enjoyed reading about your writing fears. Hoping you are well. Margarita Lillico March 13, 2023 at 2:47 PM Not worried yet:) got my language faculty in present tense still!