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It has been too long since my last rhyme
And how I missed the soup
In which each taste portrays the time
Of every cry,yell,laugh and whoop

Hey there fella
Get me under that
Umberella before it rains them dogs
And cats

Again? Foal thing!
I promise I wont leave you alone again
Like the last time you cringed
When I slowly let that rusty door open

Let me weep weep weep
While you rhyme rhyme rhyme
Oh ,how rich would I be
If I heard that with every dime!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/28/2025 2:29:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 1/23/2016 10:44:00 PM

sajdah, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**

Jay Loveless

Date: 4/4/2012 6:33:00 AM

Saj...Geez I miss you <3....Anyway, about your poem, Its really cool (: I liked it a lot. Keep writing!

Jay Loveless
Date: 8/27/2012 9:06:00 AM

Still missing you Dear <3

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/30/2011 4:42:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara

Mohammad Taha Effendi

Date: 12/27/2011 10:34:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poem today. For one, it has really good rhyme and a decent meter. It really isn't all that bad considering you have just started writing. In fact I find it quite amusing to be honest. Poetrysoup is a fraternity of mature poets as well as novices like you and I. This means that we will receive appreciation, love, guidance as well as suggestions on poems. Criticism has only led to a marked improvement in my case. We are all a pool of knowledge and help to benefit each other. Given the nature of audience that visits this site of knowledge, it is my humble request to you to kindly keep conversations clean. Once again, I really liked your poem. Love and best wishes,