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Poetry Thoughts

Alliteration- a smashing sensation. Using rhyme at the proper time is equally fine.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/17/2019 3:22:00 PM

Ogden Nash is // where the cash is... I felt a little bit of ole Ogden in your four lines as I viewed them. Nicely done, Allen. ~ gw

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/12/2019 9:29:00 AM

Without a doubt...that's what poetry's about...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2019 5:31:00 PM

so cute illustrating each one that way.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/9/2019 5:16:00 PM

Hello Allen Beilschmidt yes using rhyme at the perfect time is so fine. have a nice evening my friend.,

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/9/2019 6:18:00 PM

Thank you Darlene

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/7/2019 4:06:00 PM

Simple and to the point, Panagiota