Dineen Williams Gault Poet Acrostic

Poetry Tears

Pitiful pitter patter, snotty sorrow
On top of tattered parchment paper
Every poetic pause was a bright idea
That somehow turned into vapor
Rhyme and reason had disappeared too
Yearned for a makeshift poetry shaper

The next time I got an inkling of inspiration
Evaporation was no longer my condemnation
Actually I offered my muse a potent libation
Readily rectified that dry pen situation
Salty sobs are now tears of joyous jubilation




5/1/16

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Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2016 at 5:40 PM I see this was a winner. BIG congrats, sweetie.

Teddy Kimathi May 18, 2016 at 6:52 AM Congrats Dineen, for your placement with this deep verse!! ;-) Dineen Williams Gault May 23, 2016 at 10:47 AM Thank you Teddy, I appreciate your kind comment.

Joseph May May 17, 2016 at 5:04 PM Great write and win Dineen...Congrats Dineen Williams Gault May 17, 2016 at 8:35 PM Thank you for your kind words Joseph, appreciated!

Bl Devnath May 16, 2016 at 12:59 PM Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Dineen Williams Gault May 17, 2016 at 8:33 PM So kind of you, thank you BL!

Poet Destroyer A May 16, 2016 at 1:08 AM Dineen, Congratulations on your awesome Poetry POEM win. Stop by my blog "POETRY THERAPY." if you'd like... Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Dineen Williams Gault May 17, 2016 at 8:32 PM Thank you for your congratulations, and for your consideration in the contest. I enjoyed participating!

Susan Palli May 7, 2016 at 6:56 AM Excellent skill and expressions. Well done, Dineen. Dineen Williams Gault May 7, 2016 at 8:33 AM You humble me Susan, thank you so much!

Joseph May May 3, 2016 at 10:13 PM An acrostic with a touch of alliteration is indeed a "potent libation"... Great write Dineen Dineen Williams Gault May 7, 2016 at 6:41 AM Your cleverness extends to your responses Joseph, I appreciate that thank you so much!

Nette Onclaud May 3, 2016 at 12:04 PM how exhilarating is this write as your inspiration shines, dineen... huggs Dineen Williams Gault May 7, 2016 at 6:35 AM Why thank you nette, we could all use some inspiration sometimes, thank you!

Wendy Rycroft May 3, 2016 at 4:52 AM Great tears xxxxx good words xxx Dineen Williams Gault May 3, 2016 at 5:06 AM I appreciate that Wendy, thank you so much!

Bl Devnath May 2, 2016 at 11:52 AM Beautiful Acrostic on poetry Tears my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl Dineen Williams Gault May 3, 2016 at 5:05 AM I thank you for that BL, so appreciated!

Andrea Dietrich May 1, 2016 at 8:53 PM this is fantastic, Dineen. you chose a great theme and used vivid imagery. I love it. Dineen Williams Gault May 2, 2016 at 9:25 AM That's a wonderful compliment Andrea, it's much appreciated, thank you!!

Sara Kendrick May 1, 2016 at 5:22 PM Good one..Enjoyed reading it today..Let the poetic voice flow..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Dineen Williams Gault May 2, 2016 at 9:23 AM Thank you Sara for visiting my page as well, and for your kind comment.

Jan Allison May 1, 2016 at 9:15 AM Fabulous acrostic Dineen I like the 'tears' part so so much and the ending is uplifting:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Dineen Williams Gault May 1, 2016 at 1:47 PM Thank you for taking the time to let me know how you felt about the piece Jan, I appreciate that very much! :)