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POETRY PLEA

There was a time when every word and phrase
Each sentence stanza paragraph and verse
Was written, with a clearness to our gaze
When simply made, extravagant or terse
Crafted in empyrean structure did they seem
With lucidity and freshness of a dream. *

Though perhaps this retrospect views life 'en rose'
By one who mourns more recent language trend
Please excuse an old curmudgeon to oppose
Loss of rhythm, rhyme and form when words are penned
In wild emotion stream, no punctuation
Unshaped, obscure, unfitted for oration

I concede that those in anguish loss and pain 
May find solace in expression, ease the ache
I will greet some words bizarre that rules profane
And find space for conscious stream and Finnegan's Wake
But let's start from proven cast fore violation
Symmetry in form and grammar's affirmation 


* Hat tip to Wordsworth for the inspiration of this  verse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/29/2019 1:46:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Geoffrey
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/15/2019 12:18:00 AM
Thank you, Gregory.
Date: 4/16/2018 2:05:00 PM
Lol some are quite hard to follow when they're continuous lines without punctuation. Some not so hard. Really enjoyed this Geoffrey :)
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Date: 12/8/2017 3:49:00 PM
Well Geoffrey, I took your advice and here I am kneeling at the foot of your poem as you suggested - And I am so pleased that I am, as I wouldn't have missed it for anything. It's always so nice to meet a fellow real poet that has not lost the thread and is not ashamed to declare the sad Free Verse infection as nothing less than a violation.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/15/2019 12:16:00 AM
I don’t know how I missed replying to your very gracious and generous comments; but here is a heart felt thank you, though over two years late.
Date: 6/7/2017 6:48:00 AM
Very nice, Geoffrey!
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Date: 6/6/2017 3:08:00 AM
In your usual poetic flair , you told them Geoffrey. This is a definite fav for me.
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Date: 5/31/2017 5:55:00 PM
Interesting observations Geoffrey. I couldn't help including it in the winnning ten!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/7/2017 12:36:00 AM
Cecelia. Thanks for indulging my acerbity.
Date: 5/31/2017 5:51:00 PM
I'm pained by your rhyme but reason says it is simply sublime :) Congrats, Geoffrey!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/7/2017 12:42:00 AM
Kim - Sorry for the pain afflicted, but thanks for the appreciation unpredicted.

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