Poetry Paradise

This place is poetry paradise
And is turning my life around;
When once I would ramble, wander and scramble 
Now I think more profound.

By waking each day thinking what can I say
That will make some since of it all;
How can I be nice and give some advice
To my friends with this poetic call.

Instead of the focus on problems 
Affecting us each in kind;
Getting lost in the darkness and doldrums
Which plague our hearts and minds.

I’ve found a new path I think may last 
Longer than a lickety-split,
Perhaps till I fly right up to the sky
And poetry seems to be it.

Driven within like a non-stop spin
As the earth, moon and sun;
This search to find words for thoughts yet unheard
Is uplifting, fomenting and fun.

I thank the stars and God thus far
For leading me here today;
With all of you who read write us few
To find one another and play. 

Hide and go seek with words that speak
A whole new language of life;
This place is a drop of cool water we drink
Here in poetry paradise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mcconnell Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 9:23 AM
a lovely write, really inspiring to a subject close to all our hearts, well done. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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May 5, 2013 at 7:48 AM
Adding this poetry of paradise feeling to my favorite poetry list. xox~ LINDA
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May 5, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Good morning, TERRELL, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful day. Always & Forever! **LINDA**
Poetrysoup Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 10:33 PM
Nice
Wesley Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 11:35 AM
Just a fantastic verse that describes my feelings too. I have to dance with this one, the poetic style works its magic in tune with the rhyme.
Poetrysoup Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 10:34 PM
So true, so true...
Baity Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 9:15 AM
I luv this.... it has a really nice flow as well, i have really enjoyed reading your poetry this morning.....and thanks so much for your comment on my poem... if you liked that one maybe you should check out "Poetic Love Affair" or "Poetic Seduction"....two of my favs......smiles..Chiquita
Song Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Hi Terry-Poetry IS paradise. You got that right. Look at the 6th line-sense in-lieu of since. That should help. :) There was a very fun contest last Spring-It was called Poetry Palace. You should look up some of the entries to read for your pleasure. I think you could reference mine called Presidential Poetry Palace. All of the entries were so rich in imagination and delightful! Have a great day, Terry! Gwendolen
Jones Avatar
August 6, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Bravo, Terrell! I, too, am grateful for the soup. You said it so well, thanks!
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